Lightning Album-*New* Heaven *New*

[Kamarai]

WELCOME TO MY THREAD

---August 2010---
Heaven
Whiteout!
Call of the Haunted

---Some of my songs Previous to August 2010--- Some are good, some are not...
Endless Snowflakes <----One of my best! The electric piano at its finest!
Forgotten Soldier
Ancient Paradise
Lightning Epic
Lightning Rock
Revenge
Generic Castle Theme
Fields of Ice
Hybrid
Final Fortress
Acoustic Boogie
Death Castle
Tidal Storm
Crystal Cave
Journeys

COLLABS!
Ace of Hearts
Enigma of Tranquility
Rave Central

REMIXES!!!
Ghosts on Halloween

Okay there is my latest and greatest songs!
Now with catigories

[StarWars [XD]]

Kamarai, i didn't know you didn't have a thread! Don't worry about it though. I love your songs, specificly the one we did together . I'll critique your newest song.

I'll skip the flattery and get down to the parts I didn't like. The main one was repetition. The song just sorta went on and on, without any serious changes in key or instrument. There were only 3 instruments used, all synths. It's very hard to make a song good with so few instruments. then i realized the title.

This song is a very theme for travelling down endless hallways, or being chased by some huge beast. The sudden end could be a good pre-empt for the Game-Over theme already in the Space Game thread. i liked the solo, except that I noticed it was being used through out the song anyway. Not a big problem though, as it was good.

8.5/10 for the Final Fortress Theme.

[Kamarai]

Ya its in the space game thread also

Thanks for the critique

[ixsetf]

I started the tabs for enigma of tranquility so I can play it on my guitar Ill post them if anyone wants me to

[Kamarai]

have fun playing it

which part will you be playing? acoustic? metal? fender?

im guessing the acoustic part though

[Kamarai]

YAY INSOMNIA AND BOREDOM!!
New Song and
Preview of ???
Don't worry Star...its not going to be all techno
Pretty close to what i have now im going to start adding more instruments (a couple strings probably)

[ixsetf]

these are the tabs for sheet 0 acoustic kinda hard to play but im a beginner

----------------------------------------------------------------------------
---------------2---------------------------------2--4------------1--3--5--3
-------4-5-------4------0-2-----0-------4-5---------------0--2------------
---------------0-------------------2-------------0-------------------------
---0-0-2-3-0-0---2-0-0-3-0-2-0-0-2-0-0-2-3-0-0----2-0-0-3--0--2--0--0--2
----------------------------------------------------------------------------

[StarWars [XD]]

No no no no no! I think you read my review wrong. I liked the song for what it was written for, and because it's an RPG-based song, you don't need to put in as much effort as you would in a regular song because along with a decent song you'll be playing the game itself, thus distracting you from repetition or other aspects that normally would make Final Fortress a bad song. It was good for what it was written for.

As for Techno songs, I don't hate these at all, in fact i seem to be on a streak with them. With your newest song, though, i can 't wait to see how you make it a non-techno piece.

[StarWars [XD]]

these are the tabs for sheet 0 acoustic kinda hard to play but im a beginner

------------------------------------------------------------------------------
---------------2-----------------------------------2--4------------1--3--5--3
-------4-5-------4------0-2-------0-------4-5---------------0--2------------
---------------0---------------------2-------------0-------------------------
---0-0-2-3-0-0---2-0-0-3-0-2-0-0-0-2-0-0-2-3-0-0----2-0-0-3--0--2--0--0--2
----------------------------------------------------------------------------

A decent tab, but I think you would need a background guitar for the lower parts.

[ixsetf]

written for the acoustic part you will need a different person playing fender and later metal guitar